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  1. Date: 1/21/2010 2:20:00 AM
    I once read a poem titled ''According to my mood'' by a certain poet called Benjamin Zephaniah am not sure if am getting his name right i don't know if you have heard about him before.It talked about how a poem writer uses the language the way he/she likes even putting full stops at the biginning of the line. so the way you played with the language in the poem above is really interesting. You do things according to your mood. well done Loopylu!

  1. Date: 1/20/2010 2:58:00 PM
    Nicely written. So true. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 1/20/2010 9:29:00 AM
    I plan to store two new words in my vocabulary.....'dontcarelessness' .......and 'everydayness' two words that will prove to be 'unusuallyusable' !! Great work! ~ :)

  1. Date: 1/20/2010 2:31:00 AM
    You sound like a give all lady, a lot said in this warm piece, A full heart is a rich prize. Keep writing lady