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  1. Date: 6/21/2012 10:16:00 AM
    Have u studied Christian Science?This great poem suggest its main thesis "Man made religion" Very well put I enjoyed the read!!

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 7:41:00 AM
    Fine words of wisdom delivered in great descriptive verses with admirable rhyming.

  1. Date: 9/17/2010 3:53:00 AM
    Hell created for the devil and his angels become ours only by our choice of allegiance to the devil, but by faith I look for new heaven and new earth wherein dwells righteousness ... keep me in your prayers.

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 5:41:00 PM
    I fear God's justice and pray for mercy. Seems we've been given so much and take too much for granted. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 9/3/2010 8:57:00 AM
    i like the message and the title. Hell is there

  1. Date: 8/24/2010 8:04:00 AM
    good wirite and there is a hell read my poem lake of fire,6 million feet under,and lost in 4ever

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 5:53:00 PM
    Excellent poem. Love, Susan

  1. Date: 6/30/2010 7:23:00 AM
    I refuse to go to hell ... staying with Jesus assures that will not happen thanks for my rating and comment. GOD Bless

  1. Date: 4/6/2010 10:44:00 AM
    Wait till it allllll happens. Nice one.

  1. Date: 3/5/2010 6:20:00 AM
    Hi Susan, I myself dont't believe that there is a Hell, but won't we experience a hell everyday? We only have to watch the news and everywhere we could see parts of a hell on earth (e.g. Iraq, Afganistan, etc). Thank you for commenting "Five Aphorisms". Gert

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 6:10:00 PM
    I see where you stand on the hell issue Susan though I thought the bible did say a hell exists and that all sinners and those who do not accept JC as their savior are doomed to suffer there for all eternity. I admit I haven't really read the bible but have heard something along these lines since I was a little boy.I guess I would wonder do you personally deviate from the bible or choose to focus on other elements within it that ring true for you and discard what you don't agree with? thanks.Yoni

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 2:24:00 PM
    Strictly Bible based Susan and truth truth truth.. I studied in Bible School for three years and the Scriptures speak volumes to those who would receive their message.. though some a skeptical ..truth shall set one free.. wonderful write.. enjoyed.. luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 11:33:00 PM
    depends. what would be hell for you. and thanks for caring .BUFFY.

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 6:50:00 PM
    Well written but eternity with Jesus? I prefer riding with hell's!

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 10:32:00 PM
    Your title caught my eye and reading your poem, did provide answers--thanks for a thought provoking read...

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 7:10:00 PM
    A fitting title and yes it does?..I think I have been there, good write...thanks on Blood..Leviticus 17.4..tells us not to eat or drink blood. Satanic rituals in El Paso Texas..over the years I have investigated a the day time not bad as those people do not like day night, best of carry some protection...Thanks Danny

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 8:58:00 AM
    HI, Susan, I think you ponder alot on the Scriptures. It's hard for me to understand how the Bible says one thing and then people say other things. And even it seems there are contradictions within the Bible itself. The way I see it, the "fires of hell" are symbolic, BUT man WILL have to suffer"hell" for his misdeeds. I would imagine it as mental torture, where you are made to actually FEEL the pain you caused to others! Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 8:03:00 AM
    Thoughtful and insightful... Great word! Great work! - Mike

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  1. Date: 2/17/2010 1:01:00 PM
    Hell is more real than you and i can fathom! This piece is a dish!