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Dear GOD

LORD GOD IM CRYING OUT
TELL ME WHAT IT IS YOU WANT ME TO DO
PLEASE FATHER
I AM BEGGING YOU
DO YOU HEAR ME
CAN YOU EVEN SEE ME
IM TRYING TO EXSCAPE
BUT THE DEVIL KEEPS PULLING AT ME
HE'S EVEN GOING AFTER MY FAMILY
ID RATHER HIM TAKE ME
PLEASE LET MY FAMILY BE
EVERYONE IS FALLING AROUND ME
SO GOD HERE I AM DOWN ON MY KNEES
YOU GOT TO HELP, HELP THEM PLEASE
IM FIGHTING THIS BATTLE FOR MY FAMILY
BUT WHAT IF I LOSE
THEN THEY LOSE TOO
I CANT LET THAT HAPPEN 
DEVIL I REFUSE
THE GLOVES ARE OFF 
AND ONE OF US HAS TO FALL
THIS TIME IM GIVING MY ALL

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  1. Date: 1/17/2010 6:57:00 AM
    Can i recomend this book for you to buy off amazon, it's called devil you carn't have my family by dwight thomphson and it is good. stand fim stand on Gods word stand firm this will pass my frend hold on tight God bless you from diane

  1. Date: 1/17/2010 6:53:00 AM
    We are hard pressed on every side, but not crushed; perplexed, but not in despair; 9 persecuted, but not abandoned; struck down, but not destroyed. 2 corinthians 4: 8

  1. Date: 1/17/2010 6:49:00 AM
    a sad prayer my friend this is happening to my family also especialy my sister, we have authority over the enemy, command him to flee in Jesus' name, you are a child of God and as such the eveil one can not lay a hand upon you, Devil we command you to back off this persons family in Jesus name with his authority we command to pack your bags and go, Amen read psalm 23 and especially psalm 91 it will give you strength and comfort.

  1. Date: 1/17/2010 6:24:00 AM
    Hang in there... He is with you ..that's for sure! You have alot of talent in writhing. Keep it up. God is already helping you.