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  1. Date: 1/18/2010 1:41:00 PM
    This is really interesting to read. Loved the last stanza. About writing of real life, I probably do it half and half. I get many ideas from challenges, and the challenges lead me to imagination, stories, etc. I often use etheree for "real life" becuase it's one of the few ways I can write free about myself. I think there are so many styles of poets. I often wish I were back in the age of romantacism. I feel out of place in today's market. YOu are lucky you write the popular style! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 1/17/2010 7:44:00 AM
    If your protagonist got a cat. he may feel better. Or another kid, or three.. In all seriousness now, this seems to be a modern problem. glad you commented upon it

  1. Date: 1/16/2010 2:42:00 AM
    I think we all share those thoughts, not such a loopy idea, nice po Daniel