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falling petals

Upon a flowers petal she loves me
Upon a flowers petal she can see
I'll give her this flower 
The suns shining in this shower

Upon a flowers petal she loves me not
Upon a flowers petal grows a brown spot
I'll give give her this flower
In the dark i can not cower 

Upon a flowers petal she loves me
Upon a flowers petal can it be
I'll give her this flower
With a smile I'll she her

Upon a flowers petal she loves me not
Upon a flowers petal she loves me not

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  1. Date: 1/14/2010 1:32:00 PM
    a nicely written poem. please keep it up! ------Ell