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My legacy

I suppose,
in time I may shine.
Poetic
styling will
guide my chosen destiny.
Words my legacy.

Just trying a new style: Shadoma, six line, 3,5,3,3,7,5
Hope you like it. Judy

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  1. Date: 4/17/2010 12:23:00 AM

    Cool! I'm impressed with your diversity in trying the new form, and with the fine result you achieved! Nice job! I wonder if you will choose to try more of these shadomas!

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 1:17:00 PM

    keep smiln while you are styln Jesus loves you

  1. Date: 2/20/2010 7:01:00 PM

    thnk you for comment have good evening

  1. Date: 1/13/2010 9:53:00 AM

    You have captured the dream of poets, to have their written words serve as a shining legacy. And I like this new verse form very much. You work very well in it! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/13/2010 7:14:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your poetry today Judy. Please continue to share your writing with us. I wish you the best with life and your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol