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  1. Date: 1/11/2010 11:09:00 PM
    Very nice short poem. Great imagery of winder in December depicted with your words. Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 2:27:00 PM
    Beautiful rhyme, Mary. Great imagery and perfect flow! Peace and love, Audrey

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 1:37:00 PM
    Nice use of rhyme and imagery. I like the idea of "Snow-flowers." The alliteration works well. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your ongoing encouragement. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 12:30:00 PM
    Mary, this is what I like best , when poets "paint" the picture with their words. YOu did that stunningly here. As for the triolet, it is a fairly simple little form to get the hang of. I find it works really well when you want to describe a scene in a movie or something little in nature that really "speaks" to you. I had to triple it in Avatar. Just too much goos stuff to exclude! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 11:10:00 AM
    Excellent and beautiful poem. Best wishes and love Ravindra

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 11:00:00 AM
    There is a very surreal tone to this excellent poem, Mary. Kind of like the reverse of "A Midsummer Night's Dream." Great work! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 10:42:00 AM
    Beautiful short Rhyme that you have penned in and about the coldest time of the year. Keep the creative pen flowing. I am glad that my poem "Awed" was to your liking for I enjoyed writing the poem with the little twist at the end. Sara

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 10:32:00 AM
    This has rythm and rhyme also Mary. Very beautiful poetry. Sincerely, Love, Moses