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A Detail

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A Detail

Oooops!!!
I didn't mean to..
That's ok.
I should have knocked.
Yes...you should have but
....awkward
to say the least
You're still there
I'm still here
Why?!?
I...I don't know...
habit maybe
Maybe...
Yes...
I used to be able to...
not knock
Yea...
What happened?
A word...
friend.

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  1. Date: 1/10/2010 6:57:00 AM
    Kool piece Karena >> James

  1. Date: 1/10/2010 3:34:00 AM
    Yes, those words can end intimacy. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 1/10/2010 2:22:00 AM
    Funny!!! :D