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The brine, it is a calling

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Below is the poem entitled The brine, it is a calling which was written by poet Lena Pate. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The brine, it is a calling

Elusive dreams, I wait on rocky shores
Looking out upon the waters of a troubled storm
Crashing, tearing, reaching to drag me under
Swirling about my ankles, slick rocks beneath my feet.
 
Will you reach for me when I am falling?
Will you watch me as I drown?
Will you feel any sorrow if I left you?
Would you help me find solid ground?
 
Siren voices whisper and entice me
Foggy mists beyond my reach
Dancing, calling, whispering of a silent sleep,
If I but release my hold and swim in waters deep.

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  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:43:00 AM
    I just love this poem! I'm lost for words. But lol, that won't last long.

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:54:00 PM
    LENA, stopping by to read a couple of poems. CONGRATULATIONS!! :-) with your featured poem of the week. Goodnight~ LUV~ PD

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    Date: 8/10/2012 8:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading the poem and for looking at a few of my others. I really appreciate it.
  1. Date: 8/3/2011 3:06:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Lena. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 11:33:00 AM
    Hello Lena: Cool poem. It reminds me of one of my poems. Have a great day. Yours truly: Sheol