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I Give you My Heart

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I Give you My Heart

                         sweetheart                            sweetheart 
                    for you to ask me                  (                       )   )   
                 the reason I love you so        (                                    )
                is to ask a bird why it sings  (                                         )
            or if it could  fly without wings                                              )
          why does a rose bloom in spring                                             )
           why do those bells have to ring             I Need you here        )
           why do leaves cleave to a tree                 by my side          )
                why does honey need bees                                        )
                  there is really no mystery                                     )
                     it is  just  their  destiny                                  )
                      the same as you and I                             )
                             predestined to be                         )
                                   for I am only                   )
                                     half a heart               )
                                           without          )
                                                you    )


                                            Written:  January  9th, 2010
             For:  My Husband and for Geborah Guzzi's contest 'Who do you Love'?
             Placed 4th.

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  1. Date: 2/3/2010 6:51:00 PM
    Hey 'Laine, Congratulations on your win in the contest! Great tribute for your Hubby! Peace and Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 1/21/2010 4:01:00 AM
    Congratulations Elaine, on your success in Deborah Guzzi’s, “Who Loves Ya Baby” contest with this wonderful poem. I knew it was a winner! It's easy to see why you are among the winning poets. Your creative skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 1/20/2010 7:43:00 PM
    Such a beautiful poem full of sentiment and emotion... and the concrete form is absolutely wonderful work Lainie.. don't know how I missed this one but belated congrats for your win in Deb's contest... bravo girl...luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 1/20/2010 4:07:00 PM
    Always the sweetie pie!! Just preciuos!Light 7 Love

  1. Date: 1/13/2010 7:27:00 AM
    Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Elaine.Rgds brian

  1. Date: 1/13/2010 6:21:00 AM
    Elaine - many congrats on your winning poem. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 1/12/2010 7:27:00 PM
    Awesome, Lainie! Congratulations on your win and thank you for your kind comments on mine today. Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 1/12/2010 7:10:00 PM
    Dear Lainie, I am so happy you placed high with this one. I adore it! And anytme you want, you can ask me for edits. I did it for six years for a magazine, but as I told someone else here today, I often mess up on my OWN poems for the silliest little things. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 1/12/2010 12:43:00 PM
    Wow! I can see the effort this must have taken! Love the style and content!

  1. Date: 1/12/2010 12:11:00 PM
    A beauty!! Congratulations, Elaine...a lovely entry to Debbie's contest!! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 1/12/2010 9:35:00 AM
    What a unique presentation. This is a lovely valentine for your husband and a winner in the contest. Congratulations. Love. Joyce

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 5:36:00 PM
    Great Job this is beautiful!!! Thank You for the congrats Love Cookie

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 1:10:00 PM
    You and your love, have a beauty within... this speaks it loud and clear....yet soft and sweet! A treasure, Elaine! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 4:42:00 AM
    Wow! This is a winning poem for sure! It is a beautiful Valentine!. I am uplifted by this write and design. Lovingly, Dane Ann (soupmail)

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 12:45:00 AM
    Congrats on your success in the recent contest Elaine.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 1/10/2010 5:41:00 AM
    Great Valentine for your hubby. Very creative, expressive, romantic, and great design that should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 1/10/2010 3:21:00 AM
    Beautiful and lovely Poem with a beautiful drawing of heart that too without brush and paint. You must be a good artist having lots of drawings in your mind. I like the poem very much. All the best for your entry in 'why do you love'. On love I am also writing a long story poem Boatman’s love. Hope you would like it. Best wishes and love Ravindra

  1. Date: 1/10/2010 1:22:00 AM
    Fantastic! I really love the creativity that goes along with the special meaning. I am new to poetrysoup and am really enjoying all the great material. Your husband is a very lucky man. Thanks for the wonderful read and have a great day!

  1. Date: 1/10/2010 1:21:00 AM
    Elaine , you and him , both are 2 winners !!! ..Best of luck here ..

  1. Date: 1/10/2010 12:20:00 AM
    Best wishes with this one Elaine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments