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  1. Date: 1/14/2010 7:37:00 PM
    I think most will relate to this glimpse of love eternal. You have me smiling with this one. Enjoyed it. Karen

  1. Date: 1/7/2010 2:35:00 PM
    Charmaine,...this is such a great example of a true poet eager to share their hearts thoughts,...great write,..awesome Senryu !!!!! james,.....goes right to mine fav'z !!!! james

  1. Date: 1/6/2010 12:26:00 PM
    AWESOME!!!!! I am adding this to my favorite list. Perfect senty, Charmaine. Love, Lainie. And, thank you for your kind comments.

  1. Date: 1/6/2010 10:44:00 AM
    Charmaine, your poetry is scaling the great heights on the Soup, and they are always a joy to read >> James

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 6:21:00 PM
    Out-out-outstanding!!! I would change heart for shadow... TMFs!!!!!!!!!!!! Ruben.

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 6:15:00 PM
    i use to be an alter boy. john

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 6:12:00 PM
    This is very beautiful Charma...enjoyed...Marty

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 5:54:00 PM
    I love this one!! An awesome use of the word flame! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 5:18:00 PM
    If I list all my flickering flames.. .. it would take an encyclopedia ..luv your Senryu Charma ... such an emotional piece... thankxxx for your loving comments on my poetry also... hope all is well ... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 4:15:00 PM
    Great senryu, Thanks for your comments today. I thought I would thank and welcome Ruben back with a poem. Sounds like you are good!

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 3:34:00 PM
    Wow, nice work! It's heading to my fav's...Raul

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 2:55:00 PM
    Cool! Good senryu. Thanks for sharing this with us! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 2:19:00 PM
    Really neat write. Sounds like a first love. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara