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Kim Hilliker
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Blue Moon
Brilliant radiance Splendid celestrial sphere Shimmering Blue Moon
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daver austin
Date: 10/30/2010 6:57:00 AM
I had to read this one because I am in the process of writing an arrangement of Blue Moon for solo violin - lots of fun. Great tune. "Shimmering Blue Moon." I like it. Love, Dave
Heather Hill
Date: 5/5/2010 8:58:00 AM
There was definitely one of these over the lake outside my home the other night, what a great descriptive free verse! thanks for sharing!
Amy Green
Date: 5/1/2010 9:37:00 PM
Nice.
Gert W. Knop
Date: 2/10/2010 9:03:00 AM
Very nicely written Haiku, Kimberly! Especially the second line...And thank you for your comments...Gert
Izzy Gumbo
Date: 1/19/2010 10:26:00 AM
Brilliant Haiku. Wonderful to read you today :)
Elaine George
Date: 1/17/2010 4:53:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku, Kimberly. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/15/2010 5:15:00 PM
Kimberly, Your strategic use of alliteration and imagery make this haiku come alive. Very lovely. Aloha, Connie
Tim Ryerson
Date: 1/12/2010 2:18:00 PM
This reminded me instantly of Debussy's 'Claire de Lune'... (Now that song will be stuck in my head all day!) Beautiful! - Tim
Adell Foster
Date: 1/10/2010 11:30:00 AM
This is an excellent haiku, great imagery flowing within these perfectly formed lines. I thank you for sharingtheread and for your lovely comments on my poem :-) God Bless, Always,Adell
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/9/2010 6:11:00 PM
A great traditional haiku, Kimberly!
Caroline Cécile Delacroix
Date: 1/9/2010 3:37:00 PM
Beautiful and well written Haiku! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.
Corinne Curcio
Date: 1/9/2010 12:36:00 PM
Beautiful rendering of our recent blue moon.
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/9/2010 8:18:00 AM
Magnificent image of the full moon we had around New Year's, Kimberly. I've been away for a while but am glad I caught this work. Very, very nice haiku! Love, Carolyn
Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson
Date: 1/9/2010 8:13:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem very much. It lets the imagination see that moon. Thank you for your comments and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Elaine George
Date: 1/6/2010 12:27:00 PM
Beautiful picture you have painted for me with this lovely Haiku, Kimberly. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments.
James Fraser
Date: 1/5/2010 10:33:00 AM
Lovely images i see when i read your wonderful Haiku Kimberly >> James
Mary Meade Stephenson
Date: 1/4/2010 3:53:00 PM
A splendid haiku you have penned here...filled with lovely imagery that paints the picture in my mind. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your kind comments. Have a blessed day~Mary
Robert A. Dufresne
Date: 1/4/2010 3:54:00 AM
enjoyed this one much. -Robert
David Byrne
Date: 1/4/2010 2:06:00 AM
very nice!
Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 1/3/2010 7:10:00 PM
A fine haiku with imagery
Maryam Jameela Haniff
Date: 1/3/2010 11:55:00 AM
wonderful haiku..."shimmering blue moon"...a lovely image.....enjoyed this short but beautiful poem...happy new year!...love always, Maryam
Brian Strand
Date: 1/3/2010 8:04:00 AM
Delightful Kimberely.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
Marty Owens
Date: 1/2/2010 8:12:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku...Enjoyed...Marty
Doris Culverhouse
Date: 1/2/2010 6:25:00 PM
great visual, I saw the big moon in the day time today. on the decrease
Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/2/2010 4:52:00 PM
Nicely done on the shimmering blue moon. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Danny Nunn
Date: 1/2/2010 4:47:00 PM
Does not happen to often, but a great site...good write..thanks for the remarks on Brain Washed..Danny
Annalise Brigham
Date: 1/2/2010 4:21:00 PM
Beautiful picture you've painted with your words, Kimberly! I live on the East coast and missed this phenomena the other night! Will have to go search Google or UTube for photos! Good job! Peace and love, Audrey
Elaine George
Date: 1/2/2010 11:25:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku, Dear Kimberly. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments. Lainie
Vince Suzadail Jr.
Date: 1/2/2010 9:58:00 AM
Pretty. "Blue Moon" was a hit song when I was a kid. A few years after the National Anthem came out. Just joking. God Bless. Vince
Date: 1/2/2010 9:54:00 AM
Good use of imagery and alliteration for a creative view. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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