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Hotter Then Any Furnace

The moonlight illuminates the snow ---
Crystals sparkel like very precious gems ---
As I trod upon the ground, each step echoes ---
Steam is coming from my silent mouth ---
Even though I am bathed completely in cold sweat ---
My heart for God, burns hotter then any furnace.

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  1. Date: 2/11/2010 11:49:00 AM

    Sheol, this is how I like to see people writing about God and their love of Him, with great imagery like you've shown us here. I think this is my favorite of yours I've seen yet. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 1/14/2010 11:07:00 AM

    What a piece of mysticical writing! Nice work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 1/12/2010 8:10:00 AM

    Your beautiful faith is pleasing to God, Sheol! This verse says it all! Thank you for reading and leaving a comment on my poem! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 10:38:00 AM

    You have penned your faith very elegantly. Very descriptive and expressive write. Keep the faith pen flowing. Sara