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Rain

RAIN

written by me at 8 years old around 1945.  Printed in Philadelphia Evening Bulletin


To me rain,
Is a pitter patter on the window pain.

"But to me"
One man said,
"It means a nasty cold in the head."



(I guess I just was born a bad poet with a attitude.)
By Miriam McCue writer of bad and even worse poetry.

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  1. Date: 3/24/2010 9:12:00 PM

    Miriam, Congratulations on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/23/2010 4:09:00 AM

    LOL Great truth and wonderful humor...from a born poet...a good one. Congratulations Miriam, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 3:05:00 PM

    "Born a bad poet?" I guess not. Your rain poem is how all good poets start out - just a few meaningful lines. Of course, if you want to write bad poetry, that's easy to do, but that 8 year old sounds to me like a good poet in the making. Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 1:25:00 PM

    heehee bet you didn't know when you wrote this ar 8 yrs of age that it would be a featured poem on a poetry site when you got to be a big girl. Took you a while but you got her done! ; )

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 1:19:00 PM

    Hey Miriam! Cool eh? Congrats on your poem featured here , Lady Miriam! enjoy this honor in the land of fruits and nuts. Zit rainin' there?-Robert

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 5:48:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Miriam. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/22/2010 5:06:00 AM

    Congrats on the featured poem---well done!!

  1. Date: 1/1/2010 9:52:00 AM

    a poet writer with an attitude even at 8 yrs old! cool. Prophetic. ya still got it girl! :)-Robert

  1. Date: 12/31/2009 3:30:00 AM

    Hang on to the attitude...Poets are born with it...I liked this piece..And I have a cold as well...Happy New Year and God Bless...Taz

  1. Date: 12/30/2009 9:55:00 AM

    Really cute! andrea

  1. Date: 12/30/2009 9:48:00 AM

    Everyone has their opinion. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara