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On The Moon

Turn to ash, then ride the tide ---
You runaway to find a place to hide ---
Then sadly you realize all too soon ---
The only place left is on the Moon.

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  1. Date: 8/12/2010 8:15:00 AM

    I know I read this one already, lol i love poems when it comes to the moon.. I myself need a place to hide up in that moon. take care,..LeeAnn

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 12:09:00 PM

    good write,hopefully i'll see you on the dark side of the moon

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 5:31:00 AM

    The hiding place has a bit of a sad thought, but the moon is a lovely place to hide. Enjoyed your free verse,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/23/2010 11:50:00 AM

    Good imagery and it made me smile. Sometimes we just can't run away far enough.

  1. Date: 1/20/2010 6:48:00 AM

    A beautiful write amigo many nights i love to ride with the top down just me the highway and the moon. A beautiful write cheers brother