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Maybe it's because I'm to Shy

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Below is the poem entitled Maybe it's because I'm to Shy which was written by poet Mercedes Jordan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Maybe it's because I'm to Shy

Maybe it's because I'm to Shy
A closed mind it person
Young dumb a fool
Believe in a man other then God
My emotion is always getting the best of me

I have done a lot of bad things in my life
so do I deserve this kind of pain
Or maybe it because I'm to shy
Scared to let anybody in because they wouldn't
like what they see or maybe that the way I
feel about myself

Because I feel so ugly on the inside and out
Empty nobody can help me
Because I don't want help myself
Aww that all I want hear to make me
feel better somebody has pity on me
I feel used up
But for the last time
Stop and started to think never again will I
give a man that much power over me but
God
Leaving me emotionally drained

I'm going to started to say what in my
heart not what they want hear
To finally let go of the past move on
showing and giving a man of God all
of me

Not stop to think of what to say
Just say it
That would be nice if I could do that
Maybe it's because I'm to Shy 
 
 

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  1. Date: 12/31/2009 12:43:00 PM
    Happy new year Mercedes and a blessed 2010. Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 12/29/2009 11:11:00 AM
    A decision worthy of anyone making."Saying what is in my heart", For God will not judge, we judge ourselves. Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 12/29/2009 10:10:00 AM
    I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Mercedes. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/29/2009 9:09:00 AM
    You can say it ... for what you said now is so good. Yes, you can. Welcome to poetry soup, may you enjoy each moment in our friendship, and may your talent inspire us, as much as any may inspire you. One love.