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This Night

I’m driftwood, and I’m floating out to sea as sun descends upon my home - the grove of trees whose fragrance still remains with me. And likewise, heaven’s work of art, a mauve surrounding me, now permeates my soul. Warm water, in the twilight growing cold, is rocking me. Beneath dark blue, a shoal moves swiftly; overhead there will unfold the myriad of stars in semblance of a giant carousel in dimming sky. Those stars that glitter for the grove I love will glitter too for me, where here I lie alone, enraptured. . . and I think I might drift evermore, enveloped by this night. Written by Andrea Dietrich and entered in the Put Your Best Rhyme Forward!!!!!Contest of Just That Archaic Poet

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  1. Date: 3/13/2014 5:38:00 PM

    I stumbled across this and glad I did. Beautifully written rhyme, conjures up a calm scene. Rob

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 6:51:00 PM

    Hello Andrea, Congrats on your well deserved Win. Such a wonderful poem....Hugs...Roger

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 4:58:00 PM

    Way to go on the rhyme contest. I enjoyed the story, yet I really like the layout with mid-sentence rhymes. Very cool!

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 4:27:00 PM

    Enjoyed this wonderful read. I can imagine so easily the myriad of stars in semblance of a giant carousel in dimming sky. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Warm hugs and smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 9:17:00 PM

    Congrats on the win, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 8:29:00 PM

    it is awesome, Andrea...luv..linda

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 6:49:00 PM

    Go sonneteers! Now you have personified driftwood and I a stump LOL Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 4:47:00 PM

    Just beautiful! This was so relaxing and easy to read, and the imagery is so dreamy! I love the smooth flow and the rhyme. Congratulations on your well deserved win, Andrea!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem. It really means a lot!

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 12:09:00 PM

    Utterly transcendent. Indescribably good and worthy of the top spot. Applause for your win.

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 12:05:00 PM

    You rock to high heaven, a 7 for you and a congrats to top it all, hugs xxx

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 11:43:00 AM

    - Congratulations on your winning poem in: "Put Your Best Rhyme Forward" contest: Sponsored by: Just That Archaic Poet - Nice to take part - a pleasure to read yours Andrea - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 11:34:00 AM

    just beautiful, andrea!

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 7:47:00 AM

    Congrats on your win , Andrea

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 10:57:00 PM

    This poem flowed ever so beautifully. Like driftwood floating out to sea.

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 5:57:00 PM

    lovely sonnet Andrea....just checking out one of your golden oldies....hugs

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 12:04:00 PM

    This is an amazing Sonnet from you!Going to Fav this!

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 12:08:00 AM

    This is wonderful, Andrea. I'm with the driftwood, enraptured. -Red

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 11:58:00 PM

    Dear Andrea, I love this Sonnet. when I go to my poems I only have 7 pages and the first POEM is Bald Eagle??? I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...HG

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 11:48:00 PM

    Dear Andrea, Soup Mail Reply LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 10:03:00 PM

    Dear Andrea, Hope this finds YOU and Yours Healthy and high in the Spirit Congratulations on "This Night" getting an Honorable Mention in Constance's Contest "Anything Goes" 1/14/2010. Congratulations on YOUR well deserved Featured (11/22/2010) POEM"This Night" Congratulations on YOUR POEM"This Night" Placing First in Brian's Contest "YOUR My Favorite" Congratulations on YOUR POEM"This Night" Placing Seventh in Chris' Contest "Let the Masks Fall""Soup Mail" I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR

    Esquire Avatar HGarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 3/11/2013 10:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:13:00 PM

    Ooooooooh, love the personific in and the wonderful imagery in this colorful, dark poem. I can relate to this driftwood floating out, enveloped by the night. Sweet one. Always, Laura

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal Date: 2/6/2013 7:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    personification** :)
  1. Date: 1/17/2013 6:08:00 AM

    Just amazing !!

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 3:03:00 PM

    oh this is wonderful you have made my night this is the last for me today... glad it was a sonnet ....

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 9:03:00 PM

    I missed this one...too! : ) Great piece, Andrea! A wonderful write. Congratulations on you win-win in Chris's Contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 4:23:00 PM

    congrats on your win in chris's contest andrea! this is such a dreamy one, tranquil and pretty, I love that carousel of stars in the sky :-)

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 1:03:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in Chris' "Let The Masks Fall" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 9:30:00 AM

    congrats on your win from my wife.Ron. thank you for your kind words to her regarding her health.

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 9:20:00 AM

    Lovely poem, Andrea. Excellent flow. Congratulations on your win in Chris' contest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 7:22:00 AM

    You have a wonderful dreamy way of picturing life. I almost always walk away from your poems feeling better! Congrats Andrea

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 4:32:00 AM

    I sure felt like I was that driftwood myself, I really enjoyed reading this gem again, Andrea! Beautiful imagery you've put in here as well! Congrats on your win :D! Btw, I hope you're having lots of fun in Iowa :) hugs to you sweetie :D

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