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The tree and the trigger

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The tree and the trigger

When you pulled the trigger
you came to me and tried to love me
ask my forgiveness,
it made me cry, it was so cold
I shook with your suffering
I drew you in the afterlife
alone and crying with gods light
asking you to come
Your remorse, 
your shame, a mistake,
you had so much to give
i painted two trees
one that was dying
the other was dead
the tree loved you
amd misses you still

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  1. Date: 12/25/2009 7:55:00 PM
    I read this poem two or three times, it keeps drawing me in, an imaginative and it strikes me as a sad write. Interesting work.