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Crownless

Their heads hang lowest
                    Conquered by reality
I watch Crownless Kings

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  1. Date: 2/10/2010 12:52:00 PM

    yes i like this one " conquered by reality" is probably this best most honest one line of poetry ever.

  1. Date: 12/28/2009 4:40:00 PM

    Says so much about life in just three lines. Much for the reader to ponder about. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Happy New Year! Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 12/24/2009 7:23:00 PM

    Tell you what, James. Me thinks this is an awesome Senryu. -Robert

  1. Date: 12/24/2009 6:30:00 PM

    Don't know much about senryu, but me likes!

  1. Date: 12/24/2009 3:50:00 PM

    Love the second line. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara