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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 11/13/2010 12:01:00 AM
    this is absolutely excellent, it has all the rhythm and descriptions anyone could want in a poem, congratulations on getting through the first round.

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 11:31:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Scott. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 12:15:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Scott. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/18/2010 11:19:00 PM
    Yes, a nice practice with alliteration here and you got some great lines in here too. My favorite thing in poetry is imagery, and alliteration makes it all the better!

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 4:20:00 AM
    very fine elegantly written poem, Scott. your poetic heart and mind really comes through on this one! -Robert

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 4:02:00 AM
    Very imaginative and interesting write. Well done Scott, I really liked the last stanza. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 3:35:00 AM
    Interesting write on the four elements here. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Sara