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Blank Mind

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Blank Mind

I sat there waiting
Waiting for you to show
Time kept passing
My heart at new low

Blank mind

I grabbed my purse
Got in my car
This night was a curse
I left the hookah bar

Perfect break up night
Sad music and snow
Replaying huigs so tight
It all feels like a screen show

Blank mind

It's the next morning 
Nothing makes sense
My heart is mourning
Situation has become tense

Blank mind

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  1. Date: 12/19/2009 8:55:00 AM
    very interesting, i like how the hookah ties in with the blank mind