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In an unrealistic galaxy
Two lips
So unfamiliar
Glide
Touch
You brought me into your world
Reality is so much more
Real
You lifted me away from space
The air makes my body numb
I only feel you
Feel for you
Across the galaxy
My eyes close
I see your lips
They press mine
Time
I would have waited forever
2 beats
we meet
your world mixes into my life
I could think
But you’re here
No point
2 galaxys
1 world
our life
amazing.

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  1. Date: 12/17/2009 5:20:00 PM
    Great write. Ashlew! I like this! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us! Peace and love, Audrey

  1. Date: 12/17/2009 12:27:00 PM
    Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry with us today Ashlew. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol