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lost in the mist

Lost in the mist 
Like some kind of aybiss 

I turn my head and reach forward
As I search for anwsers 

Realizing the possibilities 
Imagining all the compatibilities

Down the long road across the river 
My mind is more so clearer

As I trace back in time
My mind is lost in the mist



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  1. Date: 5/5/2010 12:31:00 PM

    Interesting write....I especially like the fourth set of couples...Sometimes our mind seems foggy or in a haze but when we focus on a goal or dream or a calling we can reach beyond that haze...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara

  1. Date: 12/15/2009 7:42:00 AM

    Good write William! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 12/14/2009 3:13:00 PM

    As I am sitting here reading your wonderful poetry today, I would like to thank you William. First I would like to thank you for writing and sharing your poetry (whether one poem or a thousand) here at PoetrySoup.Second I would like to thank you for all your kind comments to me and to all the other excellent poets also. I wish you all the best in life and in your writing endeavors in 2010. Love and blessings to all, Carol

  1. Date: 12/14/2009 10:21:00 AM

    Merry Christmas, May answers come by the seconds. Sincerely, Moses