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Two Hearts

Quiet conveyance between two hearts,
eyes sharing a longing gaze.
Message clear, wanting, desires confirmed,
minds no longer in a daze.
No more aching, yearning, searching,
lost in a dark and winding maze.
Immersed in sweet fulfillment,
inhibitions vanish in a haze.
Consumed in love and passion,
feverish lust sets two hearts ablaze.

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  1. Date: 2/9/2010 5:30:00 PM

    Hi Patty, Hot! Very well written poem. It's time you entered some contests! There have been some recent love poem contests. This would be a great entry. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 12/11/2009 4:23:00 AM

    Very interesting poetry you have posted today Patricia. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/10/2009 3:04:00 AM

    Excellent poem and use of the english language. Talented imaginative write.