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tell her,
like she exists,
that my will is weak.

tell her,
like you care,
like you can hear.

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  1. Date: 12/8/2009 4:12:00 PM

    There is a deep feeling of sadness in this write, Vicko, and the phrasing is quite unique and moving. Nice work! Love, carolyn