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alot like love but not even close.

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alot like love but not even close.

The only thing thats holding back is distance
This unknown space so unreliable
Making it so hard to touch you my mind stops
The plot thickens and yet i still hold on
Your identity is unknown and still your all i got
Satisfactory in my eyes melting into yours
My hand touches your face and i see my own
Your body presses up against mine and i feel distant
I know Im thinking But theres still you
This Beautiful presence you give brushes off
Smiles never leaving ..ITS IMPOSSIBLE
The days wait, The nights cant sleep
I'll see you, Distance will be no problem for short time
Both people become identified
Two people so attached but so far apart
Still perfect. Always perfect

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  1. Date: 12/8/2009 10:04:00 AM
    The Christmas season seems to bring out such brilliant poetry from all the poets here at PoetrySoup making you all ~~~Poet Extraordinaires~~~. I thank you for sharing your poetry with us all through the year Ashlew. Love, Carol