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FADING LOVE

Love Loses Lustre,
As Age Agrees Acrimoniously;
Life Later Larks Liveryless:
Greying, Goaded,Garbagelike.Gee! God's Gracious Graveyard.
                                      
                                                                  ---- Princefreakasso
                                                                       (Artist and Poet)

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  1. Date: 6/28/2011 4:10:00 PM

    Good poem about growing old.

  1. Date: 12/10/2009 10:12:00 AM

    lOVE IT! Awesome!

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 5:56:00 AM

    Good use of alliteration, Prince. However, I, being somewhat old, must defend the luster of love (not passion!) and say that love matures and shines stronger and brighter with age. (I didn't see your art, yet!?!?! Love to you. Happily, Dane Ann (soup mail)

  1. Date: 12/7/2009 10:33:00 AM

    Nicely done Alliteration. I don't necessarily agree with what you are saying here. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Sara