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Her Eyes Hold Stars (for Maria)

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Her Eyes Hold Stars (for Maria)

There's so much to the world  -
fingers crack;
    feet 
        fall 
            through.

Her smile paints our sky
the colours of her iris -
mischief and white flame.







*written in exactly 25 words*

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  1. Date: 12/15/2009 11:13:00 AM

    i like it =]

  1. Date: 12/6/2009 7:28:00 PM

    Could this lovely poem be about your daughter, Micaela? I'm sure it's a delight to see the mischief in her eyes and the smile that paints your sky. Very nice! Love, Carolyn