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Written by: Ra R  Send Soup Mail  
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Sleepy Cows

the cows are asleep
snuggle closer to get warm
frightened by the bus

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  1. Date: 12/5/2009 6:37:00 AM

    thank you - I've been working on creating haikus from my dreams - this is one in which there were lots of cows asleep by the side of the road and I was in a school bus that had an accident and was toppling end over end...

  1. Date: 12/4/2009 2:49:00 PM

    Hahaha,,this made me chuckle..those poor sleepy cows..lets let them sleep,What next after the bus?the tractor?:)..love your style in writing,,well down R-Charma

  1. Date: 12/4/2009 12:08:00 PM

    Nice work Ra, loved the image this paints...Raul