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a losers prayer

I love you GOD
But I do not understand
When is it that you will let this pain
Come to an end!
I tried to end it myself
But you wouldnt let me
Wh the hell do you continue to test me!!
Im not strong
My body and soul are weak
I have nothing
Im obsolete
Ive failed its over God
I tried my best
But its done
And I do not wish to retest

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  1. Date: 12/4/2009 3:28:00 PM

    Interesting, God or no God we do all get tested, but failing is a matter of perpective. Just because something didn't go how we planned or wanted it to doesnt mean we've failed. Its possible to get out of the dark pit it seems you feel your in, get a new perspective and let someone try to help? Good write.

  1. Date: 12/4/2009 10:32:00 AM

    May I say what a pleasure it has been reading all your poetry! you are an amazing person, all you have to do is KNOW IT!!! please if you can read my poems, I write with the greatest Intent! love Simone