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Sequel To Hollow Commenting

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Sequel To Hollow Commenting

My words are pert and curt
and right in right that's hurt
give them space or get disgraced
I am infallible do not come around my poems
give me my medicine and send me on pace.

If you do, I am teeth gnash and bare
take it bad like a scum hurled here
I may be wrong
but you have no right
to get in my sight
pick my mistakes and that shaded light
because if you do so
I will ask you to keep away
from my works 
and give me back my dork
and if you persist
I will resist
through an ignore
hurt ass yeah!
take the spite!


wherever the rotten vermin enters
she sends the scare
knowing that she is on fry
entering any commenting club
she is shy
if she is allowed
in ignorance
her ego runs on mayhem
and everybody is soon on dare
she is a nerd that is hard to shake
a critique that is impervious to her faults
which she simply cannot hear
or make a corrective take.


A self conceited nerd that is fermenting in self crowned glory of artistic and linguistic  
perfection-where the foul smell of self conceit precedes her by miles.Many smirk a nose at 
the pariaah and outcaste.

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