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Serenity, The Bridge That Brought You to Thee

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Serenity, The Bridge That Brought You to Thee

how could a girl so sweet and elegant, like the most beautiful flower to exist, like the sun 
that sets in the east, be able to bring me to my knees, with tears streaming down my face, i 
look into those eyes, SERENITY, bleeds from the eyes of thee, we built this bridge from the 
northwest down to the south, the biggest smile comes across her mouth, we built this on our 
own, now we stand face to face, a picture perfect showing, by the grace of the gods, and 
with our own bare hands we built this  bridge from the ground up, with the finest forms of 
gold, now the beauty is ours, for the two of us to hold, don't let go girl, just take my hand, i'll 
place the whole world in your palms, you've given me the ability to stand on my own two 
feet again, everything is ours! you wipe the tears that fall down my cheek, that have 
covered the skin on my face, who knew the void in my heart could be so easily replaced, the 
light from heaven lays its hands down on us, the grace of your hands, such an elegant 
touch, this means so much, we built this golden bridge from the ground up. Everything will 
be fine. your eyes lock to mine, there is nothing that could have the power to bring this 
down, we'll stand here till the end of time! don't lose hope. keep the faith. realize that this is 
our place. our place in life. the silence exalts thee, not a word needs to be said, i can see the 
story written so delicately on your precious face, your smile brings me to my knees, dear 
God please, what we've given to save ourselves. what's happened between us, oceans have 
bridged us far apart, nothing could separate the passion in our hearts, the breathing never 
got too hard, i look into the eyes of an angel, we've written the pages of our own gospel. this 
is a story of courage, strength, perseverance, devotion, and and a woman and a man. 
whose backs have been pressed up against the the wall for far too long! now we stand hand 
in hand, as the sun beats down our necks, the breathing has gotten easier, now that we are 
not so far apart.

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  1. Date: 12/7/2009 1:45:00 PM

    Nice work Logan, romanticism at its best. Your love seems to overflow onto the pages of time...Raul

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 11:06:00 PM

    i love the song =)

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 11:48:00 AM

    It was so good I really can't think of anything to tell you other than good job. That is a really good poem!!! -Courtney

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 10:20:00 AM

    im, in awe...

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 3:59:00 PM

    wow,long thought out poem, good work!

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 3:46:00 PM

    Interesting write. Keep the pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 3:10:00 PM

    Very nice indeed.I am still waiting in chat.

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 2:05:00 PM

    Love can build a bridge indeed,,awesome--Charma