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The Dance

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Below is the poem entitled The Dance which was written by poet Carlos Mongrut. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Dance

Lost in the forest of surreal imagination
I see you looking at my mind
with something to hide you give me a smile
with nothing to give I feel you so mine

Our fingers are playing little games
games of love
our hands are holding the vine of desire
they don't stop until our bodies become one

The music of madness is alive
everyone poisoning
our worlds are shaking
the same way we are surfing on the waves of our own rhythm

Carlos Mongrut

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  1. Date: 8/28/2012 10:24:00 PM
    lovely write Carlos,,,thank you for sharing,,:) luv and hugs SK

    Mongrut Avatar Carlos Mongrut
    Date: 8/28/2012 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Sukmawati! :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2009 3:57:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Carlos. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

    Mongrut Avatar Carlos Mongrut
    Date: 8/28/2012 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Carol! :)
  1. Date: 11/29/2009 7:09:00 PM
    Nice poem

    Mongrut Avatar Carlos Mongrut
    Date: 8/28/2012 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Edward! :)