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On The Wings Of An Angel

Today is the day I have
chosen  to die,on the wings
of an ANGEL I will fly high

I feel I could have been 
better while I was here,
but on the wings of an
ANGEL,I will have no fear.

All my life I had to put up
a fight,but on the wings
of an ANGEL I will be alright.

Things may have been better
if id'e taken time to pray,now
I am on the wings of an ANGEL
and I am going to be ok.


                   Please LORD watch over my loved one's.

                        Colleen Marie Bono


         

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  1. Date: 3/16/2010 12:58:00 PM

    Sorry Colleen. All the angels are all booked now. Be patient and strong. Carry on some how. Best Wishes Always, Bill

  1. Date: 12/31/2009 3:05:00 PM

    Nice work, but like your other friends here,a little concerning. Don't do it. It would be a shame to lose you. happy new year. Tom.

  1. Date: 12/11/2009 7:21:00 AM

    Very nice Colleen, wonderful topic and flow....Taz

  1. Date: 12/5/2009 10:14:00 PM

    I love the new you Colleen, the love person is coming to the surface, I love it, Smile Keep trucking, God is smiling too, believe me! You're love on the beautiful wings of an angel. Good job on this poem girl! Sincerely, Love, Moses

  1. Date: 12/5/2009 5:01:00 AM

    Well written and lovely poem. I thought you are going to fly more ... and I would enjoy it more but what ever it was it was beautiful. Thanks for your kind comments on my poem. Hope you would find the Art of Loving I & II and Come O Rain come in love with Nature. Best Wishes and love Ravindra

  1. Date: 12/4/2009 9:08:00 PM

    Have you ever watch the movie, "What dreams may come" with Robin Williams? Rent it. Take care, Caroline.

  1. Date: 12/4/2009 9:02:00 PM

    Dear Colleen, the angel has always been there not to take you away on its wings, but to help you come to life and fly, just extend your hand and the angel to open your eyes. I'd like to suggest for you to read my poem, "To see eye to eye", perhaps it will inspire you. Let God take you when it is time. The poem is well written, but very sad. Thanks for sharing, Caroline.

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 3:14:00 PM

    nice flow to your poetry nice structure as well. you should enter into some of the contests i think you have a good chance

  1. Date: 11/27/2009 5:55:00 AM

    Colleen, I would really like to help you, take a look at my poem, Brim Your Minds Cup, love Simone

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 9:06:00 PM

    I concur with my dear friend James. You write well and I hope that this is just fantasy and not reality....The Southern Belle

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 5:46:00 PM

    Dear Colleen, YOU can become the Angel in real life and help other people. There are so many kids who would love to have somebody in their lives like a big sister or adopted parent. Anyway, Happy Thanksgiving to you from Iolanda!!!

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 11:26:00 AM

    Colleen, this is a sad piece. I hope it's purely a written poem, and not reality >> James

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 9:38:00 AM

    call the Hot Line. this isn't the first time i've heard this. if it's a voice you need there is one that will help. where are the Lords hands? just below your wrist. they do the Lords work but are you quiting? what can they do? they can write poetry; as long as the blood keeps pumping through them. yeah, they hurt sometimes. nothing many yes many have'nt gone through. keep working. jhl

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 8:39:00 AM

    wow this is amazing great job

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 9:16:00 PM

    This is beautiful Colleen...Thanks for sharing with us...Marty

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 7:51:00 PM

    This is a great and sadly beautiful write one of your best indeed just a great write top to bottom this is perfect

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 7:45:00 PM

    In reading the reviews from your fellow poets... I would have to agree with the comment by Sara... Why commit suicide, why take your own life when you have so much to live for... It may not seem like that now. Out there you may be the ugly duckling, but on the soup dear colleen, you are a swan.....:JP]

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 7:30:00 PM

    I'm in the chat room :)

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 6:43:00 PM

    I don't know if this poem is real, but I do know it was real for me a couple times. I never felt worse in my life.. I put my hearts prayer that I could not even utter on the wings of my guardian Angel and she must have flown it high to God because I'm still here ... and darn glad of it. God bless you Colleen and keep writing ! - Robert

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 6:40:00 PM

    Colleen, writing so beautifully u have a purpose in your life to share your beautiful words with others... so don't exit this life just yet when your gifts and talents are so needed... God luvs u and so do we here at the Soup.. Doug Ace and I are good friends and I saw your post on his poem.. so I thought I'd say "hello"..blessings ... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 5:43:00 PM

    Dear Colleen, Beautiful but tragically sad poem.There is no virtue in choosing today to die. Not when God sees so much in you and you have so much to offer others. Soup mail me if you wish, we'll talk. Lightwalker

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 4:48:00 PM

    Sad!! Hope it is not a real thought, you can give so much.

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 4:16:00 PM

    Interesting thoughts put to pen. Do you think that if you commit sucide that you will be on the wings of an angel? What is your feeling about that subject? Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara