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Detaching

And then as time pass
I just sit and stare, sit and stare 
Ruthlessly shoved out of the way like an object
And used whenever they please 
Whenever they decide its time for the little doll to play.

But no more of the little doll
No more shoving and no more forcing
As the light clears out the shadows
I will clear what I feel and keep going.

I won’t abandon hope cause is the last thing to die 
I will stop mourning over the cloths that block the sun from my path
 Those cloths will burn with the fire of my ire 
And my path will be cleared.

No more shoving away, no more using the little doll
 No more little doll, not even their Muppet 
Cause as god gave me free will I shall use it 
I’ll clear my path and they might not see trace off me again

I’ll escape from this dungeon 
I shall be free from this tempest
I shall be free from these chains that are attached right into my nerves
I shall not lose the nerve and not look back.

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  1. Date: 10/17/2010 7:58:00 AM

    wonderful write again my friend thank you duncan

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 7:37:00 AM

    i read your poem nov 2009'

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 8:41:00 PM

    quite a marvelous style !! love it, Ana Dano

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 8:56:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Anna. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/22/2009 1:31:00 PM

    Strong emotive poem Anna, a warm welcome to the Soup >> James

  1. Date: 11/22/2009 7:45:00 AM

    Most certainly God has given you free will, and not to be taken for a fool. Bravo, keep moving within your free will, Sincerely, Moses