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Ascension

The light soaks the soul
Taken beyond physical 
Earth, sky become one.

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    Izzy Gumbo
    Date: 4/5/2010 9:12:00 AM
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    Beautiful!
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    John Beam
    Date: 3/14/2010 2:19:00 PM
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    great hiaku thanks for comment and dude i like it better than sir
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 12/3/2009 6:30:00 AM
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    This is beautiful, Lance. Congratulations! Best Wishes, Carolyn
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    Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 12/2/2009 9:28:00 PM
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    congrat.on your placing with this wonderful Haiku--Charma
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    Lance Lawlor
    Date: 11/29/2009 1:52:00 AM
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    Thank you all for your kind words, it is a shame that what i consider to be one of my least challenging poems receives so much attention, but hey, i'm still grateful for the love sent my way and it will be returned tenfold. pea's and love

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    Marty Owens
    Date: 11/28/2009 6:43:00 PM
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    Very nice Haiku...love it...Marty P.S. if it's in the contest...good luck...
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    Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 11/27/2009 11:42:00 AM
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    Congratulations Lance, on your success Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” contest with this lovely haiku. (…Sorry to be so late. Don’t they say better late than never? I’m finally reading these winners. xoxoxox) . Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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    Brandee Augustus
    Date: 11/26/2009 11:13:00 AM
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    Very nice! Congratulations on placing with this piece. This really sounds like a genuine haiku.
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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 11/25/2009 6:50:00 PM
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    good write, enjoyed today!!
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    James Fraser
    Date: 11/25/2009 10:16:00 AM
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    Excellent Haiku Lance, big congrats on your winning piece in Raul's contest >> James
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    Brian Strand
    Date: 11/24/2009 11:57:00 PM
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    Congrats on your success Lance Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today
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    Date: 11/24/2009 2:56:00 PM
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    What an uplifting view. Made me smile. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor! Keep on writing. Karen
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    Donna Golden
    Date: 11/24/2009 6:53:00 AM
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    Wonderful, uplifting haiku, Lance! Congratulations on your win! Also, thank you for your sweet comments. Hugs, Donna
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    Elaine George
    Date: 11/24/2009 3:52:00 AM
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    BEAUTIFUL HAIKU, LANCE. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN IN RAUL'S CONTEST. LOVE, LAINIE
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 11/24/2009 3:33:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest Lance. Love, Carol
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 11/23/2009 9:56:00 PM
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    Congrats, Lance, on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved winning haiku... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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    Raul Moreno
    Date: 11/23/2009 9:35:00 PM
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    Lance, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 11/20/2009 5:57:00 PM
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    A lovely, inspiring haiku. Good luck in the contest! ~ Carrie
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    p sheart
    Date: 11/20/2009 4:54:00 PM
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    Beautiful Haiku, Hope you're entering it in Raul's contest! Thanks for sharing. Have a great Thanksgiving with yours! Love Light Patty
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 11/20/2009 4:34:00 PM
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    Interesting Haiku. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara


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