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Swallow You Alive

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Swallow You Alive

Nothing can save me from this whole that I've dug.
I'm blinded, I can't see the sun.
My vision has once again betrayed me.
You can't save, what you do not love.
So just give up.
It's indeed so much easier to run.
So just leave me here.
Because I've already left you and the mess that you have created.
You're nothing in these eyes.
Sick of your penetrating lies.
You twisted your knife.
Deep into my back. 
So cast aside what you've lost, because you can't bring me back.
Nothing can change the facts. 
It's about time you realize that. 
The damage is done. 
I've seperated myself from you.
You've turned your back on me so many times.
I always said that I'd give you my all, or die trying. 
Well stop now, i'm done lying.
Lying on the floor for you.
I'm just dying, dying to know. 
How does it feel to know that your dead in my eyes? 
I'm only human, and this will swallow you alive. 
This hole that I've dug deep inside.
Deep inside your heart. 
The whole wide world was always in the grasp of your hands. 
You let it go, how do it feel to be see through? 
Because now there is a hole in your heart where i used to be.
Can't you see, I left you long before you left me.

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  1. Date: 11/20/2009 11:42:00 AM
    beautiful....stunningly beautiful. you captivated me. and i will save you if i can. XO raiin

  1. Date: 11/19/2009 12:28:00 PM
    Very well written. :) and heart felt. Keep writing.

  1. Date: 11/19/2009 10:39:00 AM
    Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading Logan. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol