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Dearest

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Dearest

Dearest, why cry in vain in the black night 
fight its gentle intent to hold and rest. 
Why fear malcontent this absence of light? 
Put false ego upon the loom to test. 

What makes you conclude elation so found
from harsh light, will thus frame your hearts delight?
Reality so formed will oft be unbound,
allow grays to soften the fading light.

We are ripe stalks of Universal Eye.
Walk on courageous in the night time sky.


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  1. Date: 12/14/2009 5:11:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win obviously well deserved

  1. Date: 12/7/2009 5:31:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "My Dear.." contest, Deborah! Well-written, well-deserved! Peace and love, Audrey

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 8:06:00 PM

    Your last couplet is just so beautiful, a wonderful ending to such a thought provoking poem :) Congratulations on your win, Deborah--well deserved & thank you for your greetings in my haiku :) enjoy your day!

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 4:40:00 PM

    Awesome win, Deb. Sincerely, Love, Moses

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 6:28:00 PM

    A lovely winner, Congratulations. Joyce

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 7:33:00 AM

    Dear Light and LOVE, Deborah, YOU have the Pen of a Master Congratulations on a Well Deserved 1st Place Win in Brian's Letter Contest "My Dear" Superbly done ALWAYS YOURS...HG

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 9:43:00 PM

    Deborah, congrats on your first place win...Raul

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 11:41:00 AM

    Congratulations on your first win in Brian Strand's My dear contest. You have merited this price and honor! I love the encouragement given and the wise, tender words in this magnificent Rhyme. God bless you and keep your inspiration alive! Love and hugs, Andrew.

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 6:11:00 PM

    congrats on the number one poem in the contest!! nicely pened!

  1. Date: 11/27/2009 11:06:00 AM

    Congratulations Deb., on winning in Brian's “My Dear” writing contest with this wonderful letter. I knew this one was a winner. Congratulations on FIRST place. Your creativity enlivens the mind. Smiles, DAS-J

  1. Date: 11/26/2009 2:04:00 PM

    lovely poem for first place

  1. Date: 11/26/2009 10:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest!

  1. Date: 11/26/2009 10:00:00 AM

    HOORAY for you Deb....another magnificent and unique write from your pen! Well deserved and for sure the best of the best! Congrats on this fine win! Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 11/26/2009 8:33:00 AM

    Deborah, congratulations on your FIRST place win!! Wonderful, passionate piece! Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 11/26/2009 7:10:00 AM

    Congratulations!

  1. Date: 11/26/2009 5:04:00 AM

    Congrats, Deb, on your well deserved poem and first place win in Brian's My Dear contest... this is a truly beautiful letter from your most talented pen... happy T. Day.. I am in Pittsburgh visiting my brother and his significant other... blessings ... luv.. and again congratulations, my good friend... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 11/26/2009 4:27:00 AM

    Dear Deb! This is a masterpiece that goes on my favorite list. Congratulations on your well deserved first place. Much Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 11/26/2009 12:58:00 AM

    Congrats on your success in my contest Debbie.Rgds Brian.My latest contest LOVE CAME DOWN is now open. Perhaps you could Souplmail to confirm a forwarding address for your prize.

  1. Date: 11/18/2009 4:46:00 PM

    Don't tell me I did it finally... whew!! I must say I had a very good teacher... thankxxx ... let me know when your next challenge is coming... so I can prepare from now... haha luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. exhausted "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 11/17/2009 3:07:00 PM

    Wonderful write and good luck in Brian's contest.. luv .. put false ego upon the loom to test.. powerful line indeed.. thankxxx for sharing... Soup Mail in a few .... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 11/14/2009 7:44:00 PM

    Very apparent this one came straight from the heart, cher! Straight from the heart....My eyes are gettin' a little misty here- Tim

  1. Date: 11/14/2009 5:03:00 PM

    Beautiful, my dear Deborah! As usual wonderful rhyming! Peace and love, audrey

  1. Date: 11/14/2009 8:13:00 AM

    You never let me down....as always your poem successfully impresses me with your amazing gift of class and beauty,....Carrie

  1. Date: 11/14/2009 4:14:00 AM

    Outstanding write, the flow is beautiful and the vocab is absolute. Good luck with the contest, I wish you all my heart. Love, Sami. Oh, btw, I send you the reply back to your inbox, it has two parts.

  1. Date: 11/14/2009 12:10:00 AM

    Thank you for supporting my contest Debbie.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 11/13/2009 4:51:00 PM

    This is beautiful Deb. The flow and rhyme are perfect. It intrigues, captivates and makes one think. Excellence shines bright. Thank you for sharing. I wish you well in Brian's contest. Love to you. Happily, Dane

  1. Date: 11/13/2009 4:12:00 PM

    Goodluck in the contest Deborah and thanks for your recent comment about my Isaiah. Yes, I did e-mail a copy to my son ... smile ... Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest also.

  1. Date: 11/13/2009 2:53:00 PM

    Dearest this Dear Letter is so precious and dear,like you are,lovely poem indeed--Charma