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Written by: Milton Toran
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Too Hot For Comfort

Snowman on a hill
Dark skies give way to the sun,
Slushy, mushy, gone!

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Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 1/15/2012 9:13:00 AM I think I told you this before, but I built a little snowman when I was a kid. I took him home for a sleep over and he peed the bed and ran away before I got up.
Sara Kendrick Date: 11/28/2009 4:31:00 PM LOL. I can see the scene. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
Annalise Brigham Date: 11/14/2009 5:51:00 PM This is a delightful denryu, Milton! Like a kid, I am waiting for the first snow! Last year there was hardly enough to make a good one. Great imagery! Peace and love, Audrey
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/12/2009 12:48:00 PM I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration Milton. Love, Carol
daver austin Date: 11/12/2009 8:36:00 AM Great senryu. Thanks, Milton for the tip. Love, daver
p sheart Date: 11/11/2009 6:50:00 PM To cute! Here in Alaska here today we got snow. This reminds me of the kids in area who couldn't wait for the snow to build their first snowmen. Thanks for taking my mind off of other things.Smile, Thanks to for sharing. Take care Love Light Patty
Lena Townsend Date: 11/11/2009 6:12:00 PM Creative, very well written. It is the perfect time of year for this one. I love the title. Smiles from Lolita
Date: 11/11/2009 5:57:00 PM You have me smiling with this one. Brings back childhood memories for me. The title is so fitting for the poem. Enjoyed the view! Karen

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