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Cold Walls

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Cold Walls

This is not the words of anesha,but the words of my 10 year old daughter zakhyrah.She is a 
beginer of the poetry world.

Roof needs fixen,floor needs swept
childs hunger is not full yet,starving to
death,he or she needs fat,skinny as
a broom and still not polished yet.
So sad for that kid so so sad to be
treated like that.Needs a house a bed
to sleep in,don't you care about our
young children.

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  1. Date: 11/14/2009 6:56:00 PM
    I don't consider myself a liberal, but still a human being. Children need homes, love and understanding. Enjoy each day with your daughter, they grow up too fast. Mine is 26 but will always be dad's little girl. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 11/12/2009 1:02:00 PM
    Wow very touching poem. nice descriptive words

  1. Date: 11/11/2009 1:04:00 PM
    Thank you so much for reading my poetry! you are very talented, I love all your poetry too! If you are old enough to understand my poetry, live by their code, believe in them with all your heart, and all your wishes will come true! Keep writing, I can't wait to read more, love Simone