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Come Back To Me

Lying here at dawn
empty arms longing for you,
a new heart you've found.
Morning embraces nightfall,
true love has forsaken me.


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  1. Date: 11/28/2009 4:36:00 PM

    for it was not true...and more love awaits you! GOOD tanka! tanka you!

  1. Date: 11/12/2009 8:53:00 AM

    Another lover of the short form...wonderful write. Someone told me once that haiku lines are not capitalized...how about tanka. I profess, I always used to capitalize everything. LOve, daver

  1. Date: 11/11/2009 12:45:00 AM

    Touching my heart, this brought a tear.BG

  1. Date: 11/10/2009 5:01:00 PM

    Very nice poem...enjoyed Tanka form...Marty

  1. Date: 11/10/2009 4:33:00 PM

    the only cure; new love as soon as possible. jhl

  1. Date: 11/10/2009 4:29:00 PM

    I like this form of poetry great write thanks for sharing