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straight jacket concept

i see you standing there

your straight jacket concept leaves you motionless and scared

following the trends and schemes of the well oiled machines

of a world that doesn't make much sense

the only thing you believe in is the carbon copies of copies that you see on tv

stand tall in your slick jacket

walking in step with the other mindless clones who follow your concept

worship your idle gods who continue to tell you what to do

by choking you with your dependence on every lie that they feed you

wake up! strip off your jacket and learn to walk on your own

stop living a lie and become something more than just another clone

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  1. Date: 11/16/2009 10:18:00 AM
    that is exactaly how everyone is. govenor ment trys to control us.