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Random Thoughts *31* Double Acrostic to Rictameter

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Random Thoughts *31* Double Acrostic to Rictameter

Double Acrostic to Rictameter:  The conclusion of my "Image" series

Mit Wobet...

*******Double Acrostic*******


Malicious magician, with a condescending
Intuition> smooth, alluring with 
Tenacious passion.> supremely menacing.

Warden of your soul> life, his
Occupation> dedication in this role> a
Beast wrapped in human flesh, mingling.
Euphoria his weapon, seductive, spine
Tingling, demonic soldier.

*********Rictameter**********
******2,4,6,8,10,8,6,4,2*******

Demon,
hidden inside
complicating the mind.
****of kind, Monica McMichael.
that is when she wakes in the padded room,
breaking free of satans wrinkle.
******alone in real time.
still inside, her
Demon.

*******Free-verse*******

A voice emerges through the silence and gets louder with every second. Little bumps form
on her arms, chills shoot through her spine.. She looks in the mirror only to
find[reflecting back] a handsome man, a
smooth and charming guy..
dressed in black, 
hair slicked back,
wearing a red bow tie...


Jared Pickett
11/10/09
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  1. Date: 12/17/2009 10:22:00 AM
    An awesome conclusion to your "Image" series...not exactly what I would have expected but superb nonetheless...held me captive from the beginning to end...masterful job! Thanks so much for sharing...have a great day~Mary

  1. Date: 11/12/2009 8:22:00 PM
    For Random thoughts, they are surrounding a particular theme in the form of a demonic character. Does the mirror reflects who the person really is here? Or is possession of a confused soul? Thought provoking poem with striking imagery. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poem. Please read more any time.

  1. Date: 11/12/2009 11:36:00 AM
    you know I read this again and i'm not sure if 'he' is the hidden inside of 'her'... I will read again later also...wonderful images, amazing writing my friend.

  1. Date: 11/12/2009 11:20:00 AM
    wow! dressed in black and hair slicked back, my MiB (Men in Black, movie), has a red bow tie! I love these writes! :) Hugs and thanks for visiting my new stuff, means a lot to me that you enjoy it :)

  1. Date: 11/11/2009 5:23:00 PM
    wild poems here, nice for horror

  1. Date: 11/10/2009 1:02:00 PM
    goodness..a movie plot! scarey WOWSER! Light & Love