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Love actually

I wanted to know all my life what love was
I search the valleys and peaks
I searched for days and weeks
I gave my time and stole glances
to know the truth I took many chances
I wandered far and near
in search of the one to call dear
the line faded as did my hopes
my fight was gone I was on the ropes
the tuth evaded me 
the search divided me
in the end I stopped in my tracks
and vowed to never look back
but then out of the blue it came
for I have had it all along
I looked within myself and found you there from the start
living within me in my heart

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  1. Date: 11/20/2009 10:45:00 AM

    Very well write:) and thanks for the comments. How old are you? Cause these are very good poems.

  1. Date: 11/12/2009 5:49:00 PM

    this one is really good.I like it

  1. Date: 11/10/2009 8:36:00 PM

    Very nice...enjoyed...Marty

  1. Date: 11/10/2009 4:35:00 PM

    loving your self is the greatest love of all. great rhyming. jhl

  1. Date: 11/9/2009 8:48:00 PM

    So enjoyed this truthful poem, Malcolm, and when love is on the inside its shows on the outside of every human being.. u sound like a loving soul.. love u first .. the rest falls into place... eventually in the right time... thankxxx for your comments on my poetry tonight.. Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 11/9/2009 7:01:00 PM

    Beautiful Malcolm, yes it's been right there inside you all the time, Love actually! Smile! A powerful masterful write, Sincerely, Moses