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What is the mission?

Always been judgemental,
Needing right now to relax,
Strip me back to elemental,
I’m coming straight out of K-pax.

Never been one to follow the mainstream,
Finding it hard to be spoon fed,
A light in my chest I intend to have full beam,
Body and soul climb out the marital bed.

Feeling like i’ve wandered to help this earth, 
I became stuck, stagnated, despaired,
Each day we move closer to re-birth, 
when we reach the other side we’ll see how I faired.

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  1. Date: 11/13/2009 3:52:00 PM

    Awesome message .. makes one think to find the truth of life... love your word flow and rhyme of sorts... great write, Lane... thankxxx for your kind comments on my poetry 2 nite... luv... Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 11/13/2009 9:10:00 AM

    errr, what for marty? it would appear there is nothing in there lol :P

  1. Date: 11/12/2009 5:10:00 PM

    Check your soup mail...Marty

  1. Date: 11/11/2009 1:25:00 PM

    lol! I thought you might ;)

  1. Date: 11/9/2009 3:31:00 PM

    likewise.. awesome ;)