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Oh, Captain, Captain

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Oh, Captain, Captain

You think there will be a next time?
You've betrayed my trust
It feels like it was all lust
to you and I can not stand
These emotions at hand
I don't want to hurt
So why would I revert
back to this again?

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  1. Date: 11/6/2009 10:12:00 AM

    I am so pleased to be reading all these outstanding poems today. I thank you for sharing yours with us today Echo. Have a wonderful weekend and may you gain inspiration as well. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/5/2009 6:51:00 AM

    Interesting thoughts and advice put to pen. Keep writing. Sara