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Disguised Angel (I'm in Love)

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Disguised Angel (I'm in Love)

My lady you must have been sent from above
Immediately we clicked
You fit me like a glove
I don't know what it is
But you better not give me a kiss
Or it could lead to something bigger
Probably you having kids
Figures...
My sensitivity button triggers
I didn't think it was possible
My hormones appear to be unstoppable
I see you in my dreams
Smile bright your white teeth gleams
Hair kept nice
No trace or flakes
Or lice
No disrespect but I admire your body
So many doors to go through
Like Trump Tower's lobby
Will I enter the right one
Probably
You are the very best
To have you I am very blessed
If you leave the feelings may be worse
The sins I have pledged
Mark of the beast 
I'm cursed
I see you as a disguised angel
The number one territory
I'm here to claim you
A metaphor for my feeling
My right leg is sore from the one-knee kneelings
If I cry my eyes are the oranges can you see the peelings
Goodness that walk, so full of grace
No girl can take your place
At putting a smile on my face
The only girl to share the food on my plate
Walk hand-in-hand through Heaven's gate
My Angel is what I call you
Animorph like a cow how I go moo
You are no ghost so I won't say boo
I love you and I know you love me too
Doesn't it remind you of that song from Barney
Your love has a fire don't pull the alarm on me
Like a knot of bodies we can never untangle
My solid spirit
My baby
My Angel


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  1. Date: 1/5/2010 6:36:00 PM
    i wonder what are the IQ of the girls that fall for this. but he's probably right and probably had a lot more women, but one thing about me. i never lie. jhl

  1. Date: 10/29/2009 4:46:00 PM
    A lovely tribute to a lovely lady, and thank you for your comments, I hope you are still on those wings! Ha! ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 10/29/2009 2:43:00 PM
    This poems reminds me of songs from the 1950's like "Calling all Angels" and others. Thank you for your comments Matthew Anish