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Ice carnival

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Ice carnival

As every winter evening falls,
in a sheer cloak, thin as a shade,
a herald of ice dreams calls
and starts to lead a parade.
The winter spirit plays
with his bitter ice whiff.
And freezes the old way
into a picture, icily stiff.
Bells of an old Cathedral
cleave the deafness on the street.
Dancing in a big ice hall,
pellucid butterflies compete.
They slide on the ice
of a frozen looking-glass,
telling stories to entice,
drawing a carnival mask.
It lulls to sleep the eyes,
watching through it's face
and holds them very tight
into an everlasting embrace.

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  1. Date: 11/9/2009 3:49:00 PM

    I appreciate your kind words, Elaine.

  1. Date: 11/9/2009 11:16:00 AM

    Beautiful,Vesela. Welcome to the soup. I look forward to reading more of your writing. Lainie

  1. Date: 11/1/2009 5:17:00 AM

    Thank you, John and Jim for the kind words.

  1. Date: 10/31/2009 9:51:00 PM

    Nice work here, Vesela! Welcome to Poety Soup and hope you find a comfortable place to snuggle up in here amongst a very eclectic collection of poets. We come in all varities here. We'll be crossing trails again, I'm sure. ~<><

  1. Date: 10/29/2009 9:58:00 AM

    Welcome to PoetrySoup, Good start in this poem, Sincerely. Moses

  1. Date: 10/29/2009 5:57:00 AM

    Thank you, Carol

  1. Date: 10/29/2009 5:37:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Vesela. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/29/2009 5:20:00 AM

    thank you

  1. Date: 10/29/2009 4:52:00 AM

    Very descriptive write. Keep writing. Sara