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Inscrutable Being

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Inscrutable Being

'Twas a timeless and starless era of dense obscurity.
But there! a self-perpetuating luminary--the deity:
Being of old, the first around.
No one knows his age... those numbers abound.
His name subdivides into many.
He can be called by any.
This entity subsisted when nothingness was.
Those infallible feet trod elsewhere made not of mass.
Thunderous lighting flashes he emitted amongst the black void--
the boundless space which was devoid
of the natural lamps now in the heavens--
That sky, base of his majestic havens.
This infinite Universe...his realm,
and it's inhabitants, for ever whelm.
The GOD nearest ministers--Angels, Seraphs, and Cherubim
execute his will verbatim.
These celestial citizens reflect the Omnipotent's refulgency
which allows their physiognomies to remain in juvenescence,
'cause they are the Patriarch's offspring--
Spawns of the King of Kings.
The Matrix of Life molded them and respired in those nostrils immortality.
Personal witnesses are they of his unique ability
as the Creator and Sovereign,
whom decievest not, nor feign.
Thier kindled eyes contemplates the magnificent Physique of Jewel--
The Source of Life which radiates life's fuel--
The Energy animating all living creatures
from since the moment he formed their features.
That Glory Supreme reverberates an elegant nimbus with spectrum,
thereof, the resemblance of his glow pierces the translucent city of gold and gems and 
electrum.
O' even earth and its plenitude are his monuments--
Planet rich with elemental ornaments.
'Tis him and he alone...the Genesis of all.
So praise and gratitude to the most colossal!



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  1. Date: 6/3/2010 12:37:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Ismael. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 12:24:00 PM
    Interesting piece to reflect on. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

  1. Date: 10/27/2009 10:19:00 AM
    To show the greatest gratitude to the most colossal, is to use his gift of thought for creation that he gave us, as he did his image. amazing poem! thank you for your comment love Simone

  1. Date: 10/25/2009 6:44:00 PM
    W O W ! .... OK, Poet Prince ... THERE IT IS... Going Into My Favorites... I Read Every Word and Praised Right Along With You... GOD Deserves Our Best... And This Fits The Bill ! ... An Eternal Affirmation .... From You Ismael... For God's Children To Read In Unison, Wherever, Whoever We Are... MoonBee

  1. Date: 10/24/2009 10:25:00 PM
    Devotion and inspiration in this well written poem, Ismael. Great lines with vivid and colorful images. Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/22/2009 2:44:00 AM
    I loved the poem, the flow and the inspirational message and feel I received. Posting the words with their meanings presumes that your reader will not understand the written text. If this is the case then you are writing over your audiences heads and need to bring it down a level. Not meaning to offend because I truly did love the write, just offering my opinion. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit