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The Sad Little Pumpkin

Little pumpkin very sad
for in white he'd been clad
To be a lantern was his dream
but woeful he was white as cream
So I said, to his delight,
that I liked his coat of white
Now, because I liked him most,
my Jack O' Lantern is a ghost




Inspired by Raul Morenos' White Pumpkin contest

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  1. Date: 11/4/2009 9:25:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win--I really enjoyed this poem :) a different take on the white pumpkin

  1. Date: 10/31/2009 1:37:00 PM

    The royal carriage-pie awaits @ midnight !!! Well done QR .....

  1. Date: 10/31/2009 5:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on being second in Raul's contest. Great poem. Pam.

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 10:02:00 PM

    Lovely piece, Robin! Congratulations on your great second place in Raul's Contest!! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 9:48:00 PM

    Very inventive and congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 8:36:00 PM

    Charming and entertaining.. congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 7:18:00 PM

    Congratulations on the contest...very nice...Marty

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 6:45:00 PM

    very cool poem! Robin! congrats!

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 4:32:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Robin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 3:48:00 PM

    Congratulations on your GREAT poem placing in Raul's contest Robin! I love it! ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 3:08:00 PM

    wowser Gal what a great job! Big winner gal! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 2:25:00 PM

    Great job Robin. Congratulations. Joyce

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 2:07:00 PM

    Congratulations, Robin, on your 2nd place win in Raul's White Pumpkin contest... a nifty piece of poetry .. unique and different.. well done... keep on with it... Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 1:53:00 PM

    this is very cute lovely last line congrats!

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 12:51:00 PM

    Hooray for you Robin...this sweet poem in the winner's circle!!! Great job! Congratulations!, Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 12:50:00 PM

    AWESOME POEM, ROBIN. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN IN RAUL'S CONTEST. LOVE, LAINIE

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 12:22:00 PM

    Robin, congratulations in placing 2nd in my contest. I enjoyed your poem...Raul

  1. Date: 10/30/2009 7:09:00 AM

    VERY Super, Robin! Love, Dane

  1. Date: 10/28/2009 12:32:00 PM

    Robin, you're sure to earn high marks for this sweet tale! Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 2:27:00 PM

    What a fun poem! Good luck in the contest Robin :-)

  1. Date: 10/23/2009 11:31:00 AM

    PS--Good luck in the contest!! Karen

  1. Date: 10/23/2009 11:30:00 AM

    Nice use of rhyme and personification for fun poem. I enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

  1. Date: 10/22/2009 7:58:00 PM

    cute, good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 10/21/2009 2:52:00 PM

    now thats holloween spirit! jhl

  1. Date: 10/20/2009 2:32:00 AM

    Robin, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul

  1. Date: 10/20/2009 12:24:00 AM

    Good one!, Robin. Best wishes in Raul's contest. Love Lainie

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 10:31:00 PM

    One of the top ten!! : ) Excellent! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 4:42:00 PM

    LOL good one hon. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 1:41:00 PM

    Awesome write Robin, all the very best in the contest >> James

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 9:19:00 AM

    Wow, Robin! How clever! Best wishes in the contest. You will not be seeing much of me for a while (at least), but I want you to know how much I have always enjoyed your work. This one is outstanding. Love you, Carolyn

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